Mrs Culter our teacher said we could write about our holiday in order of amazing,scary and relaxing.
~Amazing~
I got to see my new nephew and my other nephew Conor,Conor is 1/2...we got to play in his mini sandpit and on his trampoline sadly my was sore so I couldn't jump that high.we played with his toys but I had to go after.
~scary~
I learnt how to do a front flip...I was on my trampoline and was going to flip when I landed on my back I flew up in the air then came crashing down like smashing water on rocks.
~relaxing~ I got to chill and watch two movies full out and tall girl...i also got to play with my dog
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about your holiday it sounded like fun.
Kia ora. I am Cody from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how fun your holidays sound. It
sounded like it was so much fun
I think that next time you should try to make it sound a bit more like it makes sense but I still liked your story.
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Mā te wā
Cody
Hi cody...thank you so much for the feedback,I will try make more sense...have a blessed and wonderful day!
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